About this blog
July 29, 2008
I created this site so that other people could, hopefully, enjoy a book that i’m writing, partly fictional, party based on actual events. I’m not sure if i’m going to actually publish so i thought it’ll be fun to write it on the internet for now.
I really didn’t enjoy this. There are MULTIPLE typos and some parts are very strange and boring. Where is your plot? Where is your character development? A first chapter should hook readers in…it made me want to put x out the website. very boring. you have a LONG way to come…